Wednesday, February 11, 2015

tuesday, 10th Freburary of 2015

Hello everybody,

 I'm going to talk abaut what we have done today in class of Social Science. First the teacher paqui has said to us what people have to do the journal this week. Then we stated whith the point C) development of industrial capitalism. 
This point is abaut:
*Economic system based in economic liberalism. one of the most important features was: No intervention of the state in economy.
*Development of banks: loans. direct investiment, owner of companies shares and facilitation of payments.
*Development of public limited sovieties to share risks.
then the point 3 The second Industrial Revolution and for homework we have to complete this:
*New energy sources.
*New inventions.
*Indies that develped most.
*New ways of organizing work and industrial and centrations.
*Consequences of Industrial Revolutions.
-Today we have talked around the 90% were poor people and around the 10%of population are very very rinch. Then Paqui has done a example with a gypsy kid and I have undertood egyptian and Cris has laughded at me.


 Then the class end and Cristina and me Have talked whith paqui abaut Podemos. And this is all for Today. 
I'm sorry abaut de delay, yesterday I had a lot of to study and I forgot compleletly, I'm very very sorry :(

4 comments:

Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Hello,

I love the drawings! You're an artist! But you have to do your work in time.

You have to review what you've written, because there are a lot of spelling mistakes, staring from the title. I'll come back later to check your mistakes. Bye!

jose luis ocon said...

Hello Inés:
You have different mistakes for example abaut is about correct this
bye

jose luis ocon said...

Hello Inés:
You have different mistakes for example abaut is about correct this
bye

Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Hello,

You should also add a picture about the contents we studied during the lesson.



There are a lot of spelling mistakes in common words. You have to be more careful and you have to explain the contents better. You can’t write the contents as if it was a scheme. You have to write complete sentences. These are the corrections:

I'm going to talk about what we have done today in class of Social Science. First the teacher Paqui has said to us what people have to do the journal this week. Then we started with the point C) development of industrial capitalism.
This point is about :
*Economic system based on economic liberalism. One of the most important features was: No intervention of the state in economy.
*Development of banks: loans ,direct investments, owners of companies shares and facilitation of payments.
*Development of public limited societies to share risks.
Then the point 3 The second Industrial Revolution and for homework we have to complete this:
*New energy sources.
*New inventions.
*Indies that developed most.
*New ways of organizing work and industrial concentrations.
*Consequences of Industrial Revolutions.
-Today we have talked about the fact that around the 90% are poor people and around the 10%of population are very, very rich. Then Paqui has given an example with a gypsy kid and I have understood Egyptian and Cris has laughed at me.
Then the class has end and Cristina and I have talked with Paqui about Podemos. And this is all for Today.
I'm sorry about the delay, yesterday I had a lot of to study and I forgot completely, I'm very very sorry :(
That's all. Bye!