Friday, March 11, 2016

Thursday 10th

Hi! Last Thursday 10th of March the people who didn't do the project, took the exam of the industrial revolution. I didn't take the exam so I don't know which questions appeared in it but whe the class finished some people commented that it was easy for them. I hope they'll get high marks on this exam.

On my project I talked about a kid called Max in which he experimentated the revolution first in the country with his uncle, aunt and cousins where he leant the improvements which were made and how his lefe changed when he came back with his parents into the city, his work on the factories and the life conditions he had on it.

While they were taking the exam Paqui showed us the presentation of the project on which we have to work in class which completed the information Paqui gave us on Tuesday.


The people who didn't took the exam were making exercises, revising for an exam or reading the presentation which Paqui put in the white board.

4 comments:

Carlos Bravo said...

Antonio, I think that your journal is good but you have forgotten the glossary and you have some grammar mistakes. I think you can improve it.

AnDrEi Mihaila said...

Antonio, you have to write the journal the day when we have class, no one day after.
Bye..

Manal Morrhadi said...

Antonio, I think the same as Carlos and Andrei. You have done a good journal, but you could add more information and the journal was on thursday, not friday!

Paqui PĂ©rez Fons said...

Hello,

You wrote the journal one day late and it's very short and, as usual, done carelessly. You could have added what you learned for your project, how you are organizing the work, who the members of your group are...


Here you have my corrections:

- ADD A TITLE TO YOUR JOURNAL:

Hi! Last Thursday 10th of March the people who didn't do the project, took the exam of the industrial revolution. I didn't take the exam so I don't know which questions appeared in it but whe the class finished some people commented that it was easy for them. I hope they'll get high marks on this exam.

While they were taking the exam Paqui showed us the presentation of the project on which we have to work in class which completed the information Paqui gave us on Tuesday.

That's all. Bye.