Wednesday, September 26, 2012

A film where the King Louis XIV appears.

Hello Paqui!
I want to show you a video about a film called " The Man in the Iron Mask " . In this film appear the King Louis XIV "the Sun king"!!!!!!!
Here I put the webside of the story.


Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Hi Laura,

I know the film. It´s based on a novel written by Alexandre Dumas,the author of the The three musqueteers . It´s not a true story.

There are some mistakes you have to correct:

- a film called, instead of titled.

- Word order:... the Sun King appears on this film

- "argument" means "discusión". When you refer to the content of a film or book, you have to use story (both for books and films) plot or script (for films and theater plays).

- Website

- You should include the link with the information in English, not in Spainish ;)

Good work!

Paqui Pérez Fons said...

The last thing: write a title for your post!

Laura Casero Mínguez said...

I have checked all! jajaja thanks paqui :)

Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Ok. You´re very committed with the blog work. I hope this continues during the whole year ;)