Friday, October 15, 2010

15th October 2010

Today in Social Sciences we have continued with the project work about continents and Spain. My group is formed by Yolanda Rubio, Laura Bustamante , Carlos and me. We have to do the project about the relief and climates of Spain. The period after Social Sciences, we have Physical Education and the teacher was absent and we have had extra time to continued with the projects. We have to work hard because we have to do the presentation on Monday and we have to finished as soon as posible.

Sorry for the delay, because I have to go to Ciudad Real


Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Hello Diego,

Can you include a picture that illustrates what you have been doing today? It can be something related to your project (a picture, a map you´re going to use.... You can also explain what your group has prepared for Monday.

Pay attention to some things you have to correct: In the sentence "The hour after Social Sciences...", it would be better to say "period" instead of "hour" and you could say that your teacher was absent and you have had extra time to go on with the project. The "guardias" don´t exist in English.

No problem with the delay. The most important thing is to do it. Have a nice weekend!

Kelly said...

Hello Diego,
Two things.
1. In English you should just say, "project", "work" isn't necessary.

2. When you describe the people in your group you used the object pronoun "me", but what should you use? Here's a hint: Javi made the same mistake in his last post.

I'm looking forward to seeing your project on Monday. Have a nice weekend!

Javier Alberca said...

Very good your journal Diego!

Paqui Pérez Fons said...

Hello Diego. I´ve seen that you have corrected some mistakes, but there are still some. Please, read Kelly´s corrections too.

It would be better if you included a title for the map. I know that it´s a climate map of Spain, but the rest of the people may not know it.

Study for the presentation and don´t forget to send me the images you´re going to need.

Enrique Vázquez said...

Hello Diego
Good Journal.
The same mistake that Kelly correct you.
It's project work, not project.
Have a good weekend
ps I'm excited for see what other groups have done about the project work.
See you on Monday


Ángel Aranda said...

Thank Paqui if we don´t have that hour we can´t finished the project you will love it!