Today Paqui has said the marks of the exams, they were all good, but some people could improve it. Before that Paqui has explained the industrial reconversion and delocalization, then she has written some words for the glossary, then she has written in the blackboard some interesting things about this topic, after Kelly has explained some interesting things about the first town in Mexico before USA, it was unfair, the people live near the factories and the water was contaminated, it was very heavy to see people living in that conditions, and Kelly has said that she has seen some kids swimming in the contaminated waters, i think that the owners of the factories are very intelligent moving to the poorest towns in the world, they earn more money but they some times kill people with the air or with the contaminated waters, some times they didn´t kill them but they coast them irreparable problems and they children inhereditate them, this is unfair to the people who coudn´t protects from the companies and they are withought anything.Like I said before today, Kelly has been with us.
Paqui has remaind that for wednesday we have to give her the political maps of Africa.
Sorry for the delay.
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HI, Manuel! Good journal but you have some grammars mistakes like in the present perfect, the verbs are wrong. You can explaine waht is Industrial reconversion.
See you :)
Thank you rebeca for correct me I didn´t have many time and that´s why I have that mistakes
Hello Manuel.
Remember that you have to include a picture and you have to review what you have written before publishing. There are many spelling and grammar mistakes. Review all you´ve written and try to find all the mistakes and look for a picture that illustrates what we have learned today.
You could have reminded me that you didn´t have an available account to write on the blog.
Hello Manuel,
I don´t understand the picture you´ve included. The topic was about the main problems of industries. We studied two specific concepts and what Kely explained was about one of these concept. You have to review the book and your notes and be more concrete. You can´t write "interesting things" many times. You have to be more spacific. The journal is to review the concepts we learn in the lessons.
As Kelly told you, you have to be careful with the punctuation marks: you have written only a sentence and a lot of commas. This is impossible to read. You have to finish every sentence with a full stop and start the following one with capital letter.
Another correction to your post refers to the last part. You´ve written: "I think that the factories are more intelligent..." Factories are not people. You should say "the owners of the companies".
And finally, how do you say "costar" in English? You´ve written "coast" and that means "costa". And how do you say "heredar" and "sin"? Review all these words.
See you tomorrow.
my image means that the companies suborn to the police and give less money to the people
Manuel, "sobornar" is "to blackmail". You have to explain the meaning of the picture you´ve included, because it´s not so evident and it´s difficult to establish a relation between it and what we studied in the last lesson.
It would be great that you included tomorrow´s homework on your post: you have to hand in the political map of Africa complete and coloured.
Come on, correct your mistakes.
Manuel, you have to read again the comments and correct all the mistakes we have found in it. You have corrected some things, but there are atill many mistakes and some of them are very simple. Come on, you have to take more care with your work.
The image doesn´t reflect the content of yesterday´s lesson, but only the homework you have since last Friday. Please, look for a picture related to industrial reconversion or delocalization. It´s not so difficult.
In the last sentence you´ve written, you´ve made a mistake with the verb: "to remain" means "permanecer, quedardse".You have to use "to remind" (recordar).
This picture is better, but what about the corrections? Step by step, you´ll get it!
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