Today in Social Science, Paqui has scolded us, because she did´t like so much our projects. She has told us that when we present a project we have to know some thinks like : the information is more important than design, that ... Summarizing doesn't mean underlained some parts, That..studying doesn´t mean memorized without understanding, that we can´t read a presentation and if any member of our group is blocked we have to help them. Later, Enrique collected the assessments of our team work and Andrea, Yolanda Abad and Carlos didn´t bring the assessment, Then Enrique has given us a sheet of questions about the project and we have to complete a chart about the forms of relief of all the continents, for homework Finally, Paqui has said that I do the diary, today before eight o ' clock.
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Monica! Paqui has also told us the things that she has liked of the projects! Don't forget it because it is also really important!
And we have to complete a chart about the forms of relief of all the continents, for homework.
I've found some grammar mistakes:
You are writing in present perfect, so you have to write in stead of "scolding" scolded.
If you are speaking about Paqui, you have to write, "because SHE did'n like our project..."
"When we "PRESENT" a project (not when we have did a project, the tense "have did" doesn't exist"
*Summarazing in stead of sumarized, and as it's third person singular, it must be accompained with -doesn't- not with don't"
"He has GIVEN us"(don't forget, it's present perfect)
That's all!
One more thing, the photo is really funny! jajaj
ok! thanks laura , I changed
Very good picture!!
One thing, in the first line you wrote "because it didn't like..."
must be "because she didn't like..."
I think she liked the projects but we have to improve that.
ok thank javii!
Hello Mónica and co.
The first thing I want to comment on is that I was not as angry as the picture shows. I was more deceived than angry. Many of you did the work, but it could have been much better. I gave you some advice about how to improve next time and I pointed both the things I didn´t like and the things I liked. Mónica, maybe you could find a different picture that fits more with what really happened yesterday during the lesson. It´s up to you.
Secondly, I think Laura and Javi have corrected almost all the grammar mistakes.So I don´t have much to say in this way. Good work again!
And finally, the papers Enrique collected were the assessments of your team work. Remember that I told you that you have to be sincere and objective with your group mates and yourselves and analyze if you did everything you could or you could have improved some things. I want to remind also that Andrea, Yolanda Abad and Carlos didn´t bring the assessment.So, if you read this, remember to bring it on Monday.
That´s all. Have a good weekend!
Ok paqui ,I change
Two more things, you have changed the part in which you write "some sumarized" you should write "sumarazing"
After studying you must write DOESN'T.
And project is with j, not with Y!
That's all.
Have a good weekend!
Hi!
The photo is very funny, but Paqui wasn't so angry jajja
You have written dosen´t and it's doesn´t.
bye, have a nice weekend and enjoy it.
in the last line, you have written Paqui have... and it's Paqui HAS...
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