Hello everybody! Today in
class of Social Science We have to gave to the teacher Paqui our Project of
diferents styles of art of the 18 and 19th century.
Then the teacher have
talked abaut the 1st world war to our class
and other class . Today she has explained it in spanish.
First Paqui has spoke
abaut some comics about the 1st world war:
First comics she has
showed to us the war of the trench , war, the great war
All this comics abaut
soldiers in the front of the war, their fellings their experience and his thougths.
They have been to impressive.
Then Paqui showed to us
another book like : bye to the weapones, paths of the glory and this last book I find a trailer in youtube:
For last Paqui has showed
a book call the scared and she has read some impressive parts of the book.
And for last some links of the books if your are interesting in one of them:
la guerra de las trincheras:http://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/La_guerra_de_las_trincheras
And thats all, have a nice day!
Hi Ines! I've found some fails in your journal: Is better you to put "We've given to the teacher Paqui our projects about the..." Then in the 2nd parragraph, it's "spoken", not "spoke" and finally, when you say "they have seen TOO impressive". I think you could include some more things, but it's all right! Bye Ines!
ReplyDeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of mistakes. You have to pay more attention and you should add that the lesson was especial because that day was the Book Day. Here you have my corrections:
Hello everybody! Today in class of Social Science we had to give our project of different styles of art of the 18 and 19th century to the teacher Paqui.
Then the teacher has talked about the 1st world war to our class and another class . Today she has explained it in Spanish.
First Paqui has spoken about some comics about the 1st world war:
The first comics she has showed (to) us have been The Trenches Warfare and Fucking War!
All these comics were about soldiers in the war front, their feelings, their experience and their thoughts. They have been too impressive.
Then Paqui has showed (to) us (an)other books like : Farewell to Weapons, Paths of Glory and about this last book I have found a trailer on Youtube:
Finally Paqui has showed a book call Fear and she has read some impressive parts of the book.
And finally here you have some links of the books if you are interested in one of them:
Puta guerra: http://www.hislibris.com/%C2%A1puta-guerra-1914-1919-tardi-y-verney/
El miedo:http://melibro.com/el-miedo-de-gabriel-chevalier/
La guerra de las trincheras:http://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/La_guerra_de_las_trincheras
And that’s all, have a nice day!
Bye.