Today was the last day of class of Social Science of the year.
Today we have done a lot of things.
Paqui has made a black board to draw some things, and She had drew a house and next to the house has drew Jose Luis saying Oh my guinness! with a bear in his hand, it has been too fun. The teacher Guillermo have whent to our class to had stick next to the door. Then paqui has said to him to has drew something and he has wrotte 'tecnologye' and then Paqui has corrected it. Then she explain the situation of Cuba, Abaut the cold war, the president of Cuba Fidel Castro, The USSR had missiles in Cuba,USA blockade Cuba and The consecuence Cuba had of this, The couldn't had all products they needed. Then a fire arrile has started we has to whent aut. Paqui, Cristina and melost the other partners, then in the back of the high school we have met with them, Then we have retouned to the class we take our things.
And this is an smal drawing I have done of th Cuba's situation.
And this is all for today have a nice Holidays!
HI!
ReplyDeleteI think that your drawing is very funny. Have you enjoyed with this lesson?
I found some mistakes in your journal:
Bear (oso) you have to write beer
black board:it's a whiteboard
The teacher Guillermo CAME to our class and sticked the board on the wall
He draw and he wrote
ABOUT not abaut
and some words bad written
I think that your journal it's ok
Hello Inés and Amalia,
ReplyDeleteAmalia's corrections are OK.
Your idea of the drawing is good, but you could also have included some pictures of the main facts related with Cuba.
You have many spelling mistakes. You have to pay more attention when you write and review before posting. This is the complete text corrected:
Today was the last day of class of Social Sciences of the year.
Today we have done a lot of things.
Guillermo has made a whiteboard for the classroom to write some things, and she had drawn house and next to the house has drawn José Luis saying Oh my guinness! with a beer in his hand, it has very funny. The teacher Guillermo has come into to our class and stuck the whiteboard next to the door. Then Paqui has said to him that he had to draw something and he has written 'tecnologye' and then Paqui has corrected it. Then she has explained the situation of Cuba, abot the cold war, the president of Cuba Fidel Castro, The USSR had missiles in Cuba, USA blocked Cuba and the consequences Cuba had of this : they couldn't have all products they needed. Then a fire drill has started we have had to go out. Paqui, Cristina and me have lost the other partners, then in the back of the high school we have met with them, Then we have come back to the classroom totake our things.
And this is an smal drawing I have done of (th) Cuba's situation.
You could also add the glossary you learned during the lesson. Bye!