Today in class of Social Sciences we have started with a review of the Renaissance Art. Paqui has explained us the society of the Modern Era with a pyramid of the privileged and underprivileged people and its features.
Later we have seen some pictures of the Renaissance Art.
Then Paqui has told us about a project for Tuesday, the 30th of September and we have formed the groups to do the project. I'm going to do the work with Jose Mari, I think that we are going to do it in a good way.
In this class, we have learnt new words like corpse (cadáver), remains (restos), investment (inversión), court (tribunal), low rank nobleman (noble de baja categoría , to sponsor (patrocinar), to compete (competir), to hire (contratar), to fire (despedir) and pediment (frontón).
We have started very well!
Hello, I am José Luis Ocón this journal are very bad because are explained bad, Gustavo has to improve and you forgot put the source in the photo. GUstavo this is mi opinion and you will have to respect my opinion.
ReplyDeleteGoodbye Paki...
HI!
ReplyDeleteI'm Amalia ,I don't think that your journal is as bad as Jose Luis has said but I'ts not so complete and it has many mistakes:)
today we have spoken also about the patrons and an important family of bankers :The Medici.
See you!
Hello,
ReplyDeleteI'm Fernando, your jounal isn't bad,but is a little incomplete. I have seen that you have include a picture about the different types of columns, but you haven't talk about the others architectural elements that we have seen.
See you on Monday!
Hi Gustavo! I don't think that your jornal is as bad as Jose Luis has said. It's true that it has many mistakes but is okay. One mistake is instead of "has tolk" is "has told". See you Gustavo!
ReplyDeleteHi, Gustavo,
ReplyDeleteAs your classmates have said, there are several mistakes on your journal. You have to be more careful with whay you write and review what you've written before publishing. Erase all you find in brackets and correct everything I've pointed you in bold (negrita):
- ...has explained us the society of the Modern Era with a pyramid of the privileged and underprivileged people and (his) its features.
-...some pictures of the (Gothic) Renaissance Art.
- ...has told us about a project for Tuesday, the 30th of September and we have formed the groups to do the project.
-...we are going to do it in a good way.
- Erase the word "While" and replace it for "Meanwhile/ In this class" and don't forget about the accents in the Spanish words: cadáver, categoría
- We have started very well!
I think you could have included more information about what I explained about the general features of Renaissance, the chronology...
Explain the picture you've included. What does it refer to? And don't forget to include the source and another tag with your name.
That´s all. See you!