Today in the class of Social Science first Paqui has given us some books about the 4º course of
Social Science. But some persons, how Jesus Ignacio, Laura Casero and me don´t have book becouse
Paqui don´t have enough books. And we have to fotocopy it.
After this, we have corrected the scheme about the Renaissance Art.
The Renaissance Art was a style of the 15th and 16th century. It started in Italy and it spread out to the rest of Europe. We complete the scheme with the Arcchitects: Alberti, Bramate, Brunelleschi, Michelangelo and their works the Church of san Lorenzo, santa maria novella etc. With Painters : Massacio, Leonardo da Vinci and their works Mona Lisa, Tribute Money etc. And with the Sculptors sculpture: Donatello, Bounarrotti and their works example the David Moses.
HELLO FERNANDO, YOUR JOURNAL IS VERY SHORT.
ReplyDeleteI FOUND SOME MISTAKES LIKE:
- Paqui don´t HAVE enough books.
- And we HAVE TO fotocopy it.
- We complete THE scheme with the ARCHITECTS: alberti, bramate, brunelleschi, michelangelo ( THE NAMES OF THE ARCHITECTS IN CAPITAL LETTER)AND THEIR WORKS: the church of san lorenzo, santa maria novella etc. (THE NAME OF THE WORKS IN CAPITAL LETTER (The Church of San Lorenzo ,for example)
-THE SAME WITH PAINTING.
YOU CAN WRITE THE WORDS OF GLOSSARY, THAT PAQUI WRITE ON THE BLACKBOARD.
-YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE LINK OF THE PICTURE. YOU ALSO CAN WRITE SOMETHING MORE OF RENASSANCE ART...
BYE.
Hello Fernando! Maybe your journal is a little short, I don't know what is the Paqui's opinion.
ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence you have written ABAUT and it's ABOUT, be careful.
The other persons who don't have the book are Gonzalo, Andrea, me and another person who I don't remember.
Other thing is that you have written MAST and it's MUST.
I am all right with the mistakes that Mónica has found.
I don't find any more mistakes, but maybe there's someone.
Bye bye! (:
Hello Fernando!
ReplyDeleteYou must write "Social Sciences" in stead of "Social Science". And I think you must write "like" in stead of "how" in the third line.
Bye!
Hello everybody,
ReplyDeleteI agree (not "I´m all right", as Cristina has written) with Mónica, Cristina and Salva: the journal is short ands it has a lot of mistakes. There are many spelling and grammar mistakes. You have to be more careful, Fernando, and read you post before publishing it.
Appart from the mistakes your classmates have corrected, you have to check how to write the following words correctly and change them:
- How do you say "curso" in English? It´s written on the cover of the book
- abaut
- third person singular of "not to have"
- fotocopy
- how do you say "quien" in English? How do you translate the following sentence: Brunelleschi, que (quien) construyó ...
- All the proper nouns have to be written in capital letters.
You should add more examples or the works of art we´ve watched and you could also include your opinion: which ones you´ve most liked...
And finally, remember that all the verbs have to be in the Present Perfect.
I hope you improve your post soon. See you on Friday.
Hi, Fernando, I'm agree with Cristina and Monica,your journal it's a little short. I am all right with the mistakes that Mónica has found.
ReplyDeleteI don't find any more mistakes, but maybe there's someone.
Bye, bye:)