Today in Social Sciences we have presented the projects work about the five continent of the world.
The first group that has presented his project work has been Spain.(Yolanda, Diego, Laura, Carlos).
I like this presentation because it was very complete,and it also has a good drawing about Spanish climate and relif.
After this group have presented the project work my group, it was about Oceania and Antarctica.(Yolanda, Silvia, Mª Luz and Enrique ).I think we have done a good work on this project work.
We have done a big card board with some photos and some texts.
Then, the next group has been Africa's group.(Rebeca, Angel, Juan Carlos and Isa). They have done a newspaper with a programme with pictures and different texts.
I like this group because they have worked hard with the newspaper. The newspaper is very good.
Not all people could finish, Asia and America and Europe's groups had not time.
Next class they will present us their projects works.
I think this class has been interesting and funny because we have learned many things about this continents.
I'm waiting for Wednesday to see what other group have done.
Bye.
This is a presentation about Antartica and oceania, made by : Silvia, Mª Luz, Yolanda Abad and Enrique.
This is a presentation about Africa, made by : Rebeca, Isa, Juan Carlos and Ángel.
Hello Enrique,
ReplyDeletePay attention to the corrections and please make the suitable changes:
- Remember that there are 6
continents in the world.
- Remember that Kelly corrected to Diego something about how to say "trabajo" in English.
- Pay attention to the word order in the sentence: "Después de esto, mi grupo ha presentado su trabajo".
- Remember also how to say "y yo". Kelly has made this same correction several times on this blog.
- How do you write "periódico" in English?
- And finally: how do you write "estos proyectos" in English?
I´m looking forward to see you corrections. You can also include your opinion about your own project presentation.
Bye!
ok Paqui I'm going to correct the mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHi!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Enrique all the projects that we could have seen have been very nice. In the first part of our project(Spain) I have been very nervous but the I have done it well.
P.D.:This is an experience for have been the first group.
See you tomorrow
Hi!
ReplyDeleteVery good journal Enrique
Paqui one thing if you want i can put the videos. they are in youtube
Enrique,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Paqui. You have made many careless grammatical and spelling errors.
For example:
1."I thing we have done a good..." the verb is not "to thing" it's "to think".
2."I like this group because they have work hard with the newspapper." There are many mistakes in this sentence. #1 present perfect = subject + "have/has" + past participle. So what should "they have work" be?, #2 the preposition for the phrasal verb "to work hard" is always "on" so it should be "to work hard on... not "to work hard with", #3 the spelling of "newsppaper", what should it be Enrique?
You must be more careful in the future.
Hello Ángel. Read your mail. I´ve sent you some comments for the uploading of the videos.
ReplyDeleteEnrique, remember to read the comments and correct the mistakes. You wrote one week agoi and you haven´t corrected anything. You have to work more.
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