tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post9153027225758514183..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 17th SeptemberPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-52769231423479557652015-09-21T16:54:00.121+02:002015-09-21T16:54:00.121+02:00Hello again,
These are my corrections:
- Erase...Hello again, <br /><br />These are my corrections: <br /><br />- Erase the words in brackets and correct the words highlighted in black.<br /><br /><b>First paragraph</b><br /><br />Today has been the second day of Social Sciences, but for me, and I don’t know if for everyone else too, this lesson has been the first one, because the other one was only to meet each other and to talk a little bit about <b>what this term is going to be like </b>. Today we’ve started with “unit 1”. In reality, “The 16th and 17th centuries” are units 8 and 9 from the 3rd ESO’s book, but as we didn’t learn it in 2nd ESO, we’re studying it now, but joined in only one <b>unit</b>. <br /><br />Remember the expression "to be... like". For example "What is this... like? " (¿Cómo es...?)<br /><br /><b>Fifth paragraph</b> <br /><br />I can’t understand why people let children (to) govern a kingdom, even if they were oriented by his court or the people who had to make the decisions on the child king<b>’s</b> behalf.<br /><br />"Let" desn't need "to" after it: "Let me explain", "Let me tell you"<br /><br /><b>Sixth paragraph</b><br /><br /> As I’ve heard in class, Charles’ family was a little bit unlucky. Why? Well, a lot of members died, but not because of the<b>ir</b> advanced age. I mean, perhaps there was someone who did, but the rest passed away because of illnesses, or I don’t know why, but I’m sure that if Paqui’s said that they <b>dind’t have much</b> luck; <br /><br />You can say "be lucky" or "have much luck", but not only "have luck"<br /><br /><b>Seventh paragraph</b><br /><br />Well, as I was saying (sorry, I <b>go on and</b> on very frequently), some members of Charles’ family died, so Charles I inherited a lot of territories like the Indies, <b>Castile </b>, some territories in the north of Africa and the Canary Islands from his mother Joanna the Mad, <b>Aragón</b>, Sardinia, Sicily and Naples from his grandfather Ferdinand of Aragón, Burgund<b>y</b> from his father Philip the Handsome and <b>the Austrian</b> territories from his other grandfather Maximili<b>an</b> of Habsburg.<br /><br /><b>Eighth paragraph</b><br /><br />We’ve seen the conquest of the American territories <b> superficially</b>, the Aztecs, the Incas, etc. <br /><br />The complement of manner goes after the direct complement. The order of complements is place, manner and time.<br /><br />And the last line: <br /><br />And with this, I<b>’ve ended</b> my journal. See you (the) next time.<br /><br />That's all. These mistakes are not serious, but with these corrections your will improve your writing. Bye!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-77507028810723848552015-09-18T15:38:40.538+02:002015-09-18T15:38:40.538+02:00Thanks everyone and thanks Paqui to explain me ano...Thanks everyone and thanks Paqui to explain me another time the story of how Charles I took all these territories. On Monday we will see what happen.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12983900959801433344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-64908423413100939032015-09-18T01:01:53.160+02:002015-09-18T01:01:53.160+02:00Ohh my god! This is a very good journal. Well done...Ohh my god! This is a very good journal. Well done Lore! For me this fist class was very exciting.. I think that this unit will be interesting. I'm curious to know why all the Charles' family died..It's a coincidence? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13581146525235452924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-64211982410531276212015-09-17T23:14:41.157+02:002015-09-17T23:14:41.157+02:00Hello girls,
Well done, Lorena. You've writt...Hello girls, <br /><br />Well done, Lorena. You've written a lot and almost everything is correct. I will let your classmates find some small mistakes you've made. If they don't tell them to you, I'll correct them for Monday, so don't forget to have a look on the comments to your post next week. <br /><br />As for the content, Charles I didn't start ruling when he was 5. He became the <b>heir</b> of the Low Countries, Burgundy and Luxemburg when his father died, but his grandfather Maximilian ruled on his behalf and so did Ferdinand II the Catholic in Castile until his death. When Ferdinand died, he was 16 and he inherited Aragón too and as his mother Joanna was unable to rule, he proclaimed himself king of Castile too and became in charge of Castile, Aragón and the Low Countries...Later, when Maximilian died, he inherited the territories of Austria and the possibility of being elected emperor. <br /><br />Good night!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-73719500156595901502015-09-17T22:44:03.828+02:002015-09-17T22:44:03.828+02:00Thanks for you comment Lucía, but I've said th...Thanks for you comment Lucía, but I've said that he started to rule at this age. Yeah, I've miss to say the reason, this is true, but I didn't remember hahaha. I wish Paqui explains us the conquered territories of America by the different characters of the European history in a deeper way. It seemed to be very interesting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12983900959801433344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-40316115151778359932015-09-17T21:04:52.669+02:002015-09-17T21:04:52.669+02:00As you have said, today Paqui has explained Charle...As you have said, today Paqui has explained Charles I's life (or Charles V's, if we talk about Germany). I think that you have summarized very good what we have learned today (Charles I's heritage, his family tree, his bad luck because of the deaths, etc). You have forgotten to say why Charles I started to rule at the age of five, because his father died but his mother was alive... but as you know, in this period women were unable to rule. Yes, it's a sad story.<br /><br />See you in class friends! Bye :)Lucía Villafrancahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02787662871800112062noreply@blogger.com