tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post8869971138295490495..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: Monday, 14th of October, 2013Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-15546951730520995862013-10-19T23:37:18.593+02:002013-10-19T23:37:18.593+02:00Hello Cristina and Paqui!
Thanks about the correc...Hello Cristina and Paqui! <br />Thanks about the corrections! One thing Paqui, you have written "The Milmaid" and the correct form is "The Milkmaid" and Cristina, you have written "lloking" and the correct form is "looking"<br />Bye! See you the next day!Maribel Lucerónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170386487112272679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-65803424881672323672013-10-16T17:27:19.936+02:002013-10-16T17:27:19.936+02:00Hello Maribel:
As I told you, I am going to be in ...Hello Maribel:<br />As I told you, I am going to be in charge of the grammar. If any of you don't understand any of my explanations, please, let me know.<br />Here are some more corrections. <br />- The people around the corpse(cadáver) were lloking at him. Related to what you said about theatres and autopsy, "quirófano" in English is "theatre room".<br />- Society WAS(singular). Pay attention to singular and plural because you make a big amount of mistakes due to that, e.g, childrenSSSS<br />- Another problem that I often see: Sometimes a verb must be followed by another verb. This second verb is usually an infinitive, with or without "to" or an -ing form. The problem is that, if you have to write the verb in the past, you write both verbs in the past or the second one and this is wrong. You wrote: All the people pay to appeared(Todo el mundo pagó para aparecer). This is what you must do: ONLY write the past of THE FIRST VERB: All the people PAID to appear.<br />- "series" is singular, but it is written with a final -s(this comment is for Angela too) It is NOT "serie" , singular, "series" plural. It is just a singular word, so you should say " there is a TV series, there is a series on TV.<br />- "Hasta" is "till" or "until": He didn't speak properly TILL....<br />I think this is enough for today. I loved your choice of paintings and enjoyed your explanations a lot.Cristina Blancohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439085395672440974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-46624334955436788312013-10-15T22:18:45.296+02:002013-10-15T22:18:45.296+02:00Hello again,
These are my last corrections:
As...Hello again, <br /><br />These are my last corrections: <br /><br />As Siria has said to you, you have to write names of the paintings in Italic font and all the words in capital letters, except for the prepositions and articles. For example: <i> The Meninas</i><br /><br />And these are my comments about the contents: <br /><br />- I looked for the real name of <i>The Night Watch</i>, because it's too long and I didn't remember it exactly<br /><br />- Rembrandt's paintings tell us a lot about the society of the Low Countries, a bourgeois society and not so worried about religion. That's why there were many collective portraits: people had money to pay to appear on a painting with their friends or colleagues. And the same happens with Vermeer's paintings: they show us the interiors of bourgeois houses with people doing common activities, like reading, sewing, cooking... That's what I said when I talked about society in the Low Countries and the differences of these paintings with the Italian ones. <br /><br />- <i>The Night Watch</i> is a day scene, but the painting was so dirty that people thought it was a night scene. Here you have a link where you can read after its restoration and the different appearence it has now: <br /><br />http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2053923/Rembrandts-famous-Night-Watch-sees-light-day-multi-million-museum-revamp.html<br /><br />- On <i>The Lacemaker</i> the woman is making lace (encaje)<br /><br />- As for <i> The Milmaid</i>, I said that this was the Dutch favourite painting. They made a poll in Holland and this is the painting people prefer there. That's why we talked about what we think would be the Spaniards' favourite painting. Luis said that he thinks that people would choose <i>The Meninas</i> and other people talked about other paintings, like <i>The Third of May</i> by Goya or the <i>Guernika</i> by Picasso or <i>Veus at Her Mirror</i>. Every person had different opinions about their favourite paintings. <br /><br />- This sentence: Today we have (studied) <b>started with</b> the events that happened during the reign of the Charles I, Philip II, Philip III, Philip IV and Charles III.<br /><br />- At least Charles <b>I</b>I tried to rule(d)<br /><br />- has (explained some schemes) <b>showed some pictures</b> of the r<b>oyal</b> family and she has said that they were <b>dressed</b> in black because <b>it was</b> the period of "The Counter Reformation"<br /><br />-...a scheme about Charles I that we have <b>to</b> complete(d)<br /><br />That's all for the moment. I suppose Cristina is going to correct some grammar and spelling mistakes that last, but you have done a good work. Good night! <br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-75555175524508448552013-10-15T21:42:37.564+02:002013-10-15T21:42:37.564+02:00Very good journal Maribel! Your journal is very co...Very good journal Maribel! Your journal is very complete and it have all the details that Paqui has explained in the class.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11784466098002656430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-44662228423509056152013-10-15T20:36:21.664+02:002013-10-15T20:36:21.664+02:00Hello Maribel,
Just one thing for now: you can&#...Hello Maribel, <br /><br />Just one thing for now: you can't change the predetermined font or the style of the post. You have to use the font everybody uses and don't use the bold font (negrita). I changed this yesterday, but you've changed it again. <br /><br />I´ll come back later for the mistakes about the contents, because Cristina is going to help us with the grammar this year. So, pay attention to her corrections!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-56098123790127673582013-10-15T19:50:08.979+02:002013-10-15T19:50:08.979+02:00Hello Classmates! Hello Cristina!
Thanks about you...Hello Classmates! Hello Cristina!<br />Thanks about your corrections, I have corrected them.<br />See you tomorrow !Maribel Lucerónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170386487112272679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-83132951269283738992013-10-15T17:16:59.437+02:002013-10-15T17:16:59.437+02:00Hello Classmates!
Maribel, your journal is very c...Hello Classmates!<br /><br />Maribel, your journal is very completed and interesting but the names of the paintings have to be in Italic font and all the words in capital letters, except for the prepositions and articles. I had this verdict the last day in my journal. I havent't seen any more gramatical mistakes. I like your journal, congratulations.<br /><br />See you tomorrow.Siria Martín-Albo Sánchez-Manjavacashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05038964472494012314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-5627374314859810062013-10-15T16:20:20.129+02:002013-10-15T16:20:20.129+02:00Hi Classmates !!
Maribel your journal is really c...Hi Classmates !! <br />Maribel your journal is really complete, congratulations. I have seen one little mistake:<br />- Paqui has said that THERE ARE a serie in the TV of Isabella: I think that the correct form is THERE IS because a serie is singular.<br />I like the presentation of your journal, it's very nice. See you !! Ángela Carrascohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02321764560177253061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-41369773071555328152013-10-15T07:41:21.537+02:002013-10-15T07:41:21.537+02:00Hello everyone,
This year I am going to join your ...Hello everyone,<br />This year I am going to join your blog to make comments, most of them related to grammar and vocabulary. Please, do not hate me because of that, you know it is my job. I won't be saying nice things most of the time, but my intention if for you to improve(or remember!!!!) your grammar. Just some quick comments to start, Maribel: <br />- First line, first mistake: thinks instead of things. You shouldn't be making such basic mistakes by now.<br />- The past participle of "teach" is "taught". It is irregular.<br />I think the problem with you( I mean, the group in general)is that you don't revise basic grammar anymore. You have the feeling that you know it all, but it is necessary to revise. If you don't, you will continue making those mistakes and it is bad for your level of English.<br />On the other hand, leaving grammar behind, your presentation, the paintings you use as examples are great. Don't let your grammar mistakes destroy all that.Cristina Blancohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439085395672440974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-84940981167783473092013-10-14T22:05:04.826+02:002013-10-14T22:05:04.826+02:00Hello Classmates!
Thanks about your corrections, ...Hello Classmates! <br />Thanks about your corrections, I have corrected them, Virginia your journal I think that will you do it better than me! One kiss! <br />See you tomorrow :)Maribel Lucerónhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170386487112272679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-69820734293573837812013-10-14T21:16:49.425+02:002013-10-14T21:16:49.425+02:00Hello Maribel!
I have to tell you some things:
-Yo...Hello Maribel!<br />I have to tell you some things:<br />-You have written: (first paragraph) the doctor (surgeon) is doing an autopsy to this body and the people around were SEEN to THEM. I think this is not correct, the people were SEEING to the AUTOPSY but maybe I have confused.<br />-You have used the verb teach in various occassions but I think that is better use the verb SHOW<br />I have asked Paqui about Charles I and she has said that he didn't talk well since he was 4 years old and he didn't walk well since he was 8 years old. At least Charles I tried to ruled because his father and his grandfather had other preferences (women, party...).<br />Only this Maribel. Execelent work, continue in this way.<br />I hope to do a journal as well as you. <br />See you tomorrow!Virginia Smahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02532872084446371872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-75673969816553742132013-10-14T21:10:59.902+02:002013-10-14T21:10:59.902+02:00Hello Maribel!
Your journal is perfect; I havent&#...Hello Maribel!<br />Your journal is perfect; I havent't seen any important mistakes. You complete it with a lot of drawings, but some of theme, for example The Lacemaker of Vermeer seems to be blurry.<br />Congratulations for the journal; <br />See you tomorrow!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16597329396950077814noreply@blogger.com