tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post8555710759389004747..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: JOURNAL 25/03/2013Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-85115012960982173412013-03-29T14:42:10.828+01:002013-03-29T14:42:10.828+01:00Hello,
Fernando, you did a good work.
Most of ...Hello, <br /><br />Fernando, you did a good work. <br /><br />Most of the corrections have been made by the students, so I´m going to write only the ones nobody has found. Fernando, don’t forget to correct all your classmates have told you: <br />- Paqui <b>has</b> said (Third person singular ->has)<br /><br />-… <b>she’s got</b> angry<br /><br />- …Later, <b>the teacher has told us/ we have been told </b>that some people…<br /><br />-After <b>this, the lesson</b> has started. We have continued with <b>Unit 5</b><br /><br />You have to write complete sentences, with subject and verb. Don’t schematize or copy the notes literally. <br /><br />-<b>invest</b><br /><br />-<b>governments</b><br /><br />-<b>Europeans</b> in capital letters<br /><br />-Word order in this sentence: I think some people <b>haven’t copied</b> this<br /><br />-<b>colonialism</b>. You’ve written this word in a wrong way several times<br /><br />-<b>Jules Ferry</b><br /><br />-The right to <b>decide </b> by themselves<br /><br />-<b>Nazis</b> in capital letters<br /><br />- If a person <b>says</b><br /><br />-<b>misión</b><br /><br />-<b>the</b> white man’s<br /><br />-<b>Darwinism</b> in capital letters<br /><br />-<b>maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaany</b> people instead of “muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch”, because “people” is a countable noun<br /><br />-…because <b>as…</b> You can't write "how". "How" is "cómo" and it can only be used for direct or indirect questions. For example, "How old are you?" or "She asked me how was my weekend". <br /><br />That's all. See you!<br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-20297389707446422542013-03-25T23:46:10.405+01:002013-03-25T23:46:10.405+01:00Hello! These are the mistakes I have found and my ...Hello! These are the mistakes I have found and my suggestions:<br />- Paqui has told Alicia will fail the term if she doesn't participate ON the blog, so Alicia has got angry. <br />- Later, we have told are going to fail if they don't participate ON the blog. <br />- You should include the definition of colony and you can also say that Paqui has asked us its definition.<br />- in which..<br />- You can include that some strategic places are canals, ports, straits...<br />- Europeans in capital letters.<br />- by saying that they / colonies.<br />- I think that some people haven't copied this:<br />- Paqui has spoken about racism.<br />- doesn't exist.<br />- You can include that Paqui has said that people have to show, with the actions they do, if they are or not racists.<br />- This is the vocabulary...<br />- Age of Empires in capital letters. <br />- imágenes.<br />- white man<br />- Another word you can add to the vocabulary is "humility", which means humildad.<br />- participate ON the blog. <br />I like your journal and I think that you have done a very good work. You can also include some more pictures and the link from you have taken them. <br />Bye!Roxanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10790941109606880331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-44245693807830056552013-03-25T20:04:48.851+01:002013-03-25T20:04:48.851+01:00Eh Fernando
Yo will have a lot of comments due to ...Eh Fernando<br />Yo will have a lot of comments due to the note of the evaluation and I´m one. I like very much your journal because I´ve read your journal due to my fault in class tomorrow and I understood it perfectly. That´s all. ByeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01427757278846317221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-57161457508429379082013-03-25T19:28:47.845+01:002013-03-25T19:28:47.845+01:00The only thing I have to say now is that for me it...The only thing I have to say now is that for me it is very sad that most of the people have to be threatened to carry out their duty. This world will never change. <br /><br />I´ll check the mistakes later. See you. Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-6741204968288988152013-03-25T16:45:06.445+01:002013-03-25T16:45:06.445+01:00Hi Fernando,
Your journal is very good, I also kn...Hi Fernando, <br />Your journal is very good, I also know that many people are going to comment this journal, so I have to go fast to correct some mistakes that I have seen :<br />-I now-----> I know<br />-Becouse----->because<br />-We don't participated--+--> we don't participate<br />-Abaut----->about<br />-The bads person-----> the bad people.<br />That's all, your journal is very good.<br />See youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11353554231857192974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-49315005703152046062013-03-25T15:31:29.953+01:002013-03-25T15:31:29.953+01:00Hello Fernando,
it's good but I think that you...Hello Fernando,<br />it's good but I think that you've to include the glossary and add the social darwinism. I've found some mistakes:<br />-20th century in wich..->20th century in which..<br />-saying that tey had-> saying that they had<br />-territories the colinies->territories of the colonies<br />-This i think some people did´t copy->This I think some people didn't copy<br />-colinialism->colonialism<br /><br />That's all.<br />See you!Jesus Moraleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11327766589494056633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-89497242875540445232013-03-25T15:24:46.766+01:002013-03-25T15:24:46.766+01:00Hi fernando!
Your journal is good but I find some ...Hi fernando!<br />Your journal is good but I find some mistakes.<br />-it's no evaluation it's term.<br />-it's no berween it's between.<br />So that's it. I didn't find any more mistake. It's also a very good journal and very complete too. See you!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03967098887128113982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-40403415481739466962013-03-25T15:12:56.188+01:002013-03-25T15:12:56.188+01:00Hi fernando, I like your journal, and the picture,...Hi fernando, I like your journal, and the picture, that is equal than paqui's picture, but I think that if you can say "Alicia" instead of "Alice", because you have included the two names, so you can include only one. For the rest, I don´t find any more mistakes, very well fernando.Javi Moraleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12755817354077598591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-52400448403090633252013-03-25T15:11:39.580+01:002013-03-25T15:11:39.580+01:00Your journal is good, but here are some mistakes:
...Your journal is good, but here are some mistakes:<br />has faild -> has failed<br />if you write Alice, don't write Alicia later haha<br />going to fail-> going to fail<br />we studied-> we have studied<br />las decades-> last decades<br />did't-> didn't<br />I think that some people haven't copied it.<br />See you on wednesdayAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369592390760365662noreply@blogger.com