tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post8460312498995366678..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 9th January, 2013Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-42851435084860189212013-01-10T23:06:00.713+01:002013-01-10T23:06:00.713+01:00Hello girls,
What book have you read, María?
Th...Hello girls, <br /><br />What book have you read, María?<br /><br />These are the corrections to the mistakes you haven´t found: <br /><br />- Today has been: "today" is the subject of the sentence. You don´t need to write "it". <br /><br />-... we <b>would</b>correct the exercises<br />- ...Napoleon<b>married</b>twice<br />- ... her <b>manners/bearing</b>. If you use "bearing" you have to change the verb into singular<br />- <b>caries</b> better than "cavities" and <b>she lost her teeth</b><br />- ... accused <b>of</b> being<br />- <b>Hortense</b><br />- ... <b>mistress</b> better than "lover".<br />-... they got married <b>on</b> the 9th...<br />- ... Josephine continued to <b>have</b>...<br />- When <b>the fact that Joséphine could not get pregnant</b> was obvious,...<br />-... Napoleon could <b>get</b> married ...<b>have</b> the heir...<br />- ...Maria Letizia... was Napoleon´s mother<br />-... Napoleon didn´t <b>leave</b> his love<br />-... she didn´t attend the wedding. "Attend" means "asistir a". You don´t have to add "to". <br />- Josephine´s infidelities increased their <b>mutual</b> rejection<br />- Napoleon´s family didn´t like his coronation. His mother... <b>On the painting <i>Le sacre of Napoleon</i> Letizia appears in</b> the background<br />-... they got along <b>well</b><br />-... her sons <b>Joseph and Lucien</b><br />- ... as the Habsburg <b>dynasty, so that</b> his heir.<br />- ... she <b>got</b> married again<br /> with...<br />- ... the present Spanish king <b>looks like/ takes after</b>...<br /><br />- ... <b> at</b> her suggestion<br />- ... Maria Luisa <b>fell</b> in love<br />- María Teresa of BourBon, Charles IV´s cousin<br />-... the baby <b> reminded</b> her<br />- Pierre de Villeneuve was...<b> /the commander in chief/in charge of the Hispano-French Armada</b><br /><br />That´s all. These are not serious mistakes, but the more you write, the more possibilities of having mistakes you have ;)<br /><br />Very good work!<br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-90869934332602335392013-01-10T18:25:33.881+01:002013-01-10T18:25:33.881+01:00Hi Roxana !!
Your journal is so good, i haven'...Hi Roxana !!<br /><br />Your journal is so good, i haven't found any mistakes, and the phothos are also good. <br /><br />The history of Napoleon is very interesting, I read a book relating with the french revolution, and on it appeared the mother and all of the history of him. <br /><br />Goodbye, see you tomorrow !!mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14867603254620777880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-37812253423245017402013-01-10T15:29:38.969+01:002013-01-10T15:29:38.969+01:00Very good Roxana!
For me your journal is perfect, ...Very good Roxana!<br />For me your journal is perfect, I didn´t found any mistake!!<br />Congratulations!<br />For me the most interesting thing,is the seemed that our king has with Charles IV!!Monicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11954741399164394096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-62723888249865968032013-01-09T22:42:31.455+01:002013-01-09T22:42:31.455+01:00Sorry: Marseillaise ;)Sorry: <i>Marseillaise</i> ;)Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-58308973522534246232013-01-09T22:25:57.397+01:002013-01-09T22:25:57.397+01:00Hello Roxana,
I´ve been reading your post and yo...Hello Roxana, <br /><br />I´ve been reading your post and you´ve done a really good work! Congratulations! You´ve worked very hard! There are some grammar or vocabulary mistakes that I´ll correct tomorrow (let´s give a chance to your classmates!). My only suggestion is that you erase the information about the Maresillaise from this post and use it to create a new post about this topic. You will only have to copy and paste and add some picture or a video or sound file. Embedding a video is easy. If you want to do it, I´ll explain you how to do it. <br /><br />Good night!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com