tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post8448291098322585513..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 7th May 2015 (Thursday)Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-25931700068632255212015-05-14T10:47:47.036+02:002015-05-14T10:47:47.036+02:00The paragraph about the 1905 revolution is wrong. ...The paragraph about the 1905 revolution is wrong. Correct it.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-34744660967518331942015-05-14T10:46:57.955+02:002015-05-14T10:46:57.955+02:00Hello,
Some things before the corrections:
- a...Hello, <br /><br />Some things before the corrections: <br /><br />- add the sources of the pictures<br />- change the picture of the tsar. It's the same Andrea included in her journal. <br /><br />And these are my corrections: <br /><br /><br />Today we have been around 10 minutes late to the Social Sciences lesson because the students from 2nd of Bachillerato were taking an exam. When we have <b>finally</b>started the lesson (at least), we have started learning about the Russian revolutions, which is the second point in this unit.<br /><br /><br />At the beginning of the 20th century Russia was an autocracy ruled by t<b>s</b>ars. Tsar Nicolas II concentrated a lot of power, political parties <b>were forbidden</b> and peasants we<b>r</b>e the majority of the population. Only in cities like Moscow or Saint Petersburg there were some industries and workers. Some parties appeared: the Constitutional Democrat Party, of liberal ideology; de Social-Democratic Labour Party,a Marxist party; and the Socialist Revolutionary Party, <b>which defended</b> the peasants' rights.<br /><br /><br />There were several Russian revolutions before, (during) and after World War I. Today we have studied the one of 1905 and a little bit of the Bolshevik Revolution.<br /><br />The following paragraph is wrong. Erase it and rewrite it explaining the causes, what happened and the consequences<br /><br /> (In 1905 there was a first Russian revolution with demonstrations and protests, because the tsar didn't keep the promises he had made in the Constitution about making reforms.)<br /><br />• There was another revolution in Russia in 1917: the Bolshevik Revolution. The defeats of Russian army, hunger, mobilization and protests of peasants and workers le<b>d</b> to the creation of Soviets (councils of workers, peasants and soldiers to put an end to the war and to autocracy). In February, tsar Nicolas II abdicated and a democratic Republic was declared. They created a provisional government presided by Kerensky. This government decided to continue with the war and to make reforms to transform Russia into a democracy.<br /><br />In addition, we have learnt some new concepts, such as "backwarded" (atrasado), "demonstration" (manifestación), "to put the blame on someone" (culpar a alguien) and "deser<b>tion</b>" (deserción). <br /><br />That's all. Bye. Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com