tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post7548021726022147861..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 21st/September/2011Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-5944117090734189012011-09-22T00:13:24.685+02:002011-09-22T00:13:24.685+02:00I can't believe that you are almost sixteen an...I can't believe that you are almost sixteen and Paqui still has to tell you off because you are talking, Silvia, shame on you!!<br />Isabel, it is HIGH TIME(I am using this expression too often with you lately) you learnt how to write "Journal" properly.<br />And, for Rebeca, well..apart from the fact that reading it I have felt as if I had been in the lesson myself, I don't have much to add, since Paqui has checked the mistakes I had previously spotted. Maybe, you could add a relative pronoun to the following sentence: " We have copied the index of the unit, and it is divided...." and make it "We have copied the index of the unit which is divided..." In this way you use subordination, which is a good way to show that your English is getting better and better.Cristina Blancohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439085395672440974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-57649270599225248872011-09-21T22:51:51.997+02:002011-09-21T22:51:51.997+02:00Some mistakes your classmates haven´t found:
- P...Some mistakes your classmates haven´t found: <br /><br />- Paqui has "said that we have to" or "told us to...". Remember this. "Say something to someone" ot "Tell someone to do something".<br /><br />- The 17th century is known as the Golden Century, not Baroque<br /><br />- Writers (just one "t")<br /><br />- Protestant<br /><br />- Bourgeoisie developed<br /><br />- as I have said...<br /><br />- Kepler (just one "p")<br /><br />- As Enrique has said, you have to write "the Low Countries".<br /><br />And remember to check the punctuation: <b>every time you write a dot or comma, you have to click on the space bar (not "intro". I ´ve made a mistake before)before wtiting a new word.</b><br /><br />If you have problems with your computer, look for me during the breaktime and use mine to correct your post. See you tomorrow ;)Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-46532760627639246582011-09-21T22:38:57.047+02:002011-09-21T22:38:57.047+02:00Hello Rebeca,
Try to save the picture first. Don...Hello Rebeca, <br /><br />Try to save the picture first. Don´t copy and paste it. Maybe this is the problem. Anyway, correct the mistakes your classmates have noticed and click on "save" from time to time. You can also include the suggestions they have made to improve your post.<br /><br />Have a good nightPaqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-65600038759234720922011-09-21T22:34:57.437+02:002011-09-21T22:34:57.437+02:00Paqui,I have a problem.I can´t change the picture ...Paqui,I have a problem.I can´t change the picture in this computer because when I add it,the computer close all the programmes, and I have to start again to check all the mistakes,so tomorrow I´m going to change.Sorry :(Rebeca Garcíahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07499674586418751943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-29627751175995119702011-09-21T22:08:58.945+02:002011-09-21T22:08:58.945+02:00Hi, rebeca!!
I think really you have done a very ...Hi, rebeca!! <br />I think really you have done a very good work with this yournal. I haven't anything more to add I think you have said most of the important thigs of today's class. <br />kisses ;)Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166374415810334023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-59319626095646390162011-09-21T21:39:50.384+02:002011-09-21T21:39:50.384+02:00Hi Rebeca! your post is very complete! you can add...Hi Rebeca! your post is very complete! you can add that Paqui was a little angry with Dani and me because we were speaking. The class of today was very interesting because we were learning a lot of new things.<br />And the homeworks were about the 17th Century and the Demography.silvianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-82759354155030091532011-09-21T20:26:16.643+02:002011-09-21T20:26:16.643+02:00Hello,
Rebeca congratulations, you have done a ver...Hello,<br />Rebeca congratulations, you have done a very good journal, is very complete.<br />I think that is everything that we have done in the class.<br />So congratulations.<br /><br />See you tomorrowMCMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12427606653962237123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-55793009752659554372011-09-21T19:27:04.551+02:002011-09-21T19:27:04.551+02:00Hello!!
very good journalt Rebeca,is very specific...Hello!!<br />very good journalt Rebeca,is very specific.<br />You can add that we have learnt some new words,for example:mess,famine and starvation<br />ByeBeatriz Yuste Martínezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10770682772933697317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-30761158050081517362011-09-21T18:08:47.258+02:002011-09-21T18:08:47.258+02:00Hi Rebeca!
Very good and interesting journal. It&...Hi Rebeca!<br /><br />Very good and interesting journal. It's very useful to remember all the things we have seen today in Paqui's class. <br />Only some comments:<br />You can add Klepper when you talk about Scientific Revolution.<br />And I think that is "The Low Countries" and no "Low Countries" without the "The".<br />Very Good journal.<br /><br />Cu2morrow :)<br /><br />ByeEnrique Vázquezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03040565192517802755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-39557511092874078392011-09-21T18:06:43.710+02:002011-09-21T18:06:43.710+02:00SORRY =(
It's "on the blog". NOT in...SORRY =(<br /> It's "on the blog". NOT in the blog.<br /><br />SORRY!<br />SEE YOU TOMORROWMªluz Ortiz S-Manjavacashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15595186162241676137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-78185985082573126682011-09-21T18:02:29.502+02:002011-09-21T18:02:29.502+02:00Hello everybody!
Very good journal rebeca, but in ...Hello everybody!<br />Very good journal rebeca, but in the last lines of the text you write something wrong after: influential, but "the dindn't" this is wrong is like this: "they didn't". I think so.<br />Another thing that you can add that Paqui has said that we have to participate in the blog twice a month.<br /><br />Bye bye. See you tomorrow.Mªluz Ortiz S-Manjavacashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15595186162241676137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-73405985681496702352011-09-21T17:52:33.838+02:002011-09-21T17:52:33.838+02:00Another comment about the punctuation: after every...Another comment about the punctuation: after every dot or comma, you have to clic on "intro" and let a space before the following word ;)Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-55959171076476790472011-09-21T17:50:34.133+02:002011-09-21T17:50:34.133+02:00Hello Rebeca,
Just a comment about the source of...Hello Rebeca, <br /><br />Just a comment about the source of the picture: when you´ve found the picture you want to include on Google, you have to close the picture and copy the correspondent link. The link of the picture you´ve chosen is this one:<br /><br />http://www.kalipedia.com/historia-espanola/tema/edad-contemporanea/fotos-imagen-burguesia-urbana.html?x1=20070712klphishes_167.Ies&x=20070712klphishes_229.Kes<br /><br />But this picture has a problem, because it´s an image of some bourgeois in the Contemporary Age. This painting belongs to the 19th century. It´s better that you look for a picture related to the 17th century. Maybe a Velázquez or Caravaggio painting. <br /><br />I haven´t checked the text. I hope that your classmates do it. Please, check the comments and make the necessary corrections. See you.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com