tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post7480017438490224947..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 10TH MAYPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-17992205228578374312013-05-31T11:56:32.458+02:002013-05-31T11:56:32.458+02:00Hello,
I changed the pictures you included, beca...Hello, <br /><br />I changed the pictures you included, because they had disappeared (I don't know why). These are my corrections and please, don't wait until the last moment to correct your post. There are many mistakes of capital letters and spelling: <br /><br />- Today we have <b>had</b> the lesson <b>at</b> fourth period<br /><br />-Before start<b>ing </b><br /> the lesson we have s<b>u</b>ung the typical <b>”H</b>appy birth day to you<b>” song</b><br /><br /><br />-...the stages of the World<b>War O</b>ne.<br /><br />- 1st stage-<b>W</b>ar of movement... In <b>the W</b>estern front, the German<b>s </b> attacked France ... This war <b>tactic</b> was called...But the French and the British armies could stop the Germans at <b>t</b>he Battle of Marne.<br /><br />- 2nd stage-<b>War of </b> attrition: in the <b>W</b>estern front the armies dug trenches from the North Sea to Switzerland and <b>the</b> front changed little until 1918....<br /><br />New countries joined<b>every side </b>: ...<br /><br />- <b>A </b> new front opened in the Balkans. <br /><br />- <b>In the W</b>estern front there were two bloody offensives in 1916: the <b>Germans</b> attacked ... but there were around two million(s) soldier<b>s</b> dead: <br /><br />- In the <b>E</b>astern front... <br /><br />- 3th stage-1917 crisis: this was a critical year for all the belligerents: <b>there were</b> soldiers’ mutinies in all the front<b>s</b>, the Easter rising in Ireland and <b>the Bolshevik </b> revolution in Russia.<br /><br />-In the<b>O</b>ttoman <b>E</b>mpire the Arab tribes revolted against the Turks and the British got a lot of territory. Lawr<b>e</b>nce of Arabia <br /><br /><br />- 4th stage-the end of the war: in the <b>E</b>astern front, the allies defeated Austria an<b>d</b> the <b>O</b>ttoman <b>E</b>mpire. In the <b>W</b>estern front,... <b>B</b>but they were stopped and started losing territory...<b>F</b>earing a revolution, the heads of the army advised Kaiser Wil<b>hem</b> to seek peace. <br /><br />- During the lesson Paqui has <b>told</b> us <b>about</b> some tittles of films based <b>on </b> WW1 <b>and WW2 </b>:<br /> -Saving <b>Private </b> Ryan <br /> -The <b>P</b>acific<br /> <br />Glossary:<br />War of attrition/<b> Trenches warfare</b>: Guerra de des<b>g</b>aste o Guerra de trincheras<br /><br /><br />The names of the films have to be written in Italic font (cursiva). <br /><br />That's all. See you!<br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-3370959636107008652013-05-11T13:30:08.053+02:002013-05-11T13:30:08.053+02:00Hi Juan, I agree with Carlos your journal is a lit...Hi Juan, I agree with Carlos your journal is a little short. <br />I have found some mistakes:<br />-Have sung-->Have sing<br />- Has told-->has tell<br />I think that Paqui has said that some of the films she has said are based on the WW2 not in the first. <br />You can also add this words to the glossary:<br />-To dig-->Cavar<br />-Paths of glory-->Sendero de gloria. <br />Anyway, it is a good journal . See you:))mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14867603254620777880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-15359749975782472692013-05-11T13:18:10.917+02:002013-05-11T13:18:10.917+02:00Hello Juan,
Your journal is a little bit short, yo...Hello Juan,<br />Your journal is a little bit short, you have only copied the PowerPoint slides.<br />You have some mistakes:<br />-Before started the lesson --> bejore the lesson have started<br />-birth day--> birthday<br />-world word one--> world war one<br />The other things are good.<br />See you!!!<br />AND CUT YOUR HAIR HAHAAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369592390760365662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-8759356334533073002013-05-11T12:23:23.373+02:002013-05-11T12:23:23.373+02:00Hello Juan,
The picture you've included does...Hello Juan, <br /><br />The picture you've included doesn't appear. Don't copy and paste it. Save it on your computer and upload it to your post. See you!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com