tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post6646935059691721554..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: Wednesday, 13th MarchPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-16867690868413496982013-03-17T00:02:06.981+01:002013-03-17T00:02:06.981+01:00Hello Alicia,
All the corrections the girls have...Hello Alicia, <br /><br />All the corrections the girls have made are OK: <br /><br />- As Marta said, the slogan of the IWA wasn´t created by Banksy. Banksy is a contemporary grafitti artist who made the grafitti I used on the ppt, but he didn´t create the slogan of the IWA. <br /><br />- As Roxana said, the Second International fought for the Eight Hour DAy: this proposition had been formulated by Robert Owen in 1817. The Second International assumed this goal. <br /><br />- ...Napoleon Bonapatte´s grandnephew. Erase the article before Napoleon. <br /><br />- He was elected President of the Second Republic in France and <b>later</b> he was also elected Emperor.<br />-... Italy was divided <b>into</b> many States. State with capital letters. <br />- <b>brainstorming</b> altogether.<br /><br />Your mistakes are small, but don´forget to correct them. <br /><br />See you! Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-78951294377467539122013-03-13T22:12:09.321+01:002013-03-13T22:12:09.321+01:00Hello, I think you have written a good journal. Th...Hello, I think you have written a good journal. These are the mistakes I have found:<br />- Today, in the Social Sciences' class...<br />- It established the International Workers' Day.<br />- They did not invented the 8 hours scheme, but they demanded this conditions.<br />- unit 5, which is about...<br />- Age of Empires.<br />- Spanish woman.<br />Roxanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10790941109606880331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-23619175815984966732013-03-13T21:32:30.863+01:002013-03-13T21:32:30.863+01:00Hello Alicia! I think your journal is clear and co...Hello Alicia! I think your journal is clear and complete. I agree with the things which the girls have said. And in my opinion is a better way to start the journal like that: When the class of social sciences has started Paqui has remembered... But it's good.<br />I have read on edmodo that you think that this new unit is more interesting than the last one, I agree with you haha (:<br />I think also that on Monday is a good day to do the exam. I want to finish with the exams!!<br />Bye, see you! Cris Mínguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17960240464926530743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-80867419268965787082013-03-13T18:31:02.890+01:002013-03-13T18:31:02.890+01:00Hello Alicia ! I like your journal. I agree with M...Hello Alicia ! I like your journal. I agree with María, you can include de index and you can also include more information about the First and Second International, the slogan : "workers of the world, unite !" ... I have found a little mistake :<br />-on the Monday 18th --> On Monday 18th. <br />See you bye ! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10649161883399667053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-66741475787179861342013-03-13T18:11:38.621+01:002013-03-13T18:11:38.621+01:00Hello Alicia!
Your journal it's very good and...Hello Alicia!<br /><br />Your journal it's very good and complete,I agree with the correction of María but you still have some mistakes.<br /><br />- The slogan of the IWA wasn't created by Banksy. Banksy only draw the picture of the power point.<br /><br />This is the only mistake I have found.<br /><br />Bye, bye.Marta Gómezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14892529997082010139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-31075669390785615262013-03-13T18:06:06.308+01:002013-03-13T18:06:06.308+01:00Hi Alicia !!
I like your journal, it's very g...Hi Alicia !!<br /><br />I like your journal, it's very good and very complete.But I have found a mistake:<br />- They also....instead of The also invented<br /><br />You can add the points of the scheme that Paqui has written on the blackboard. mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14867603254620777880noreply@blogger.com