tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post6421999526577576852..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 4th November (Tuesday)Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-45934861691767155652014-12-14T12:29:48.905+01:002014-12-14T12:29:48.905+01:00No corrections again. Careless work again.No corrections again. Careless work again.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-9552776176773621482014-11-11T13:30:58.812+01:002014-11-11T13:30:58.812+01:00Hello,
Please, write a title for your post and re...Hello, <br />Please, write a title for your post and remember that you have to use the present perfect and check the spelling after posting, because there are many spelling mistakes and it takes a lot to correct all this. These are my corrections:<br /><br />-The verbs in the present perfect: …<b>has</b> explained us the instructions for the Baroque Project.<br /><br />-Th<b>ese</b> two works have been chose<b>n</b> by our teacher<br /><br />-… writing the information about the<b>m</b><br /><br />-has revised our homework for today, <b>which</b> was to complete a scheme from the Baroque Art with the book's conte<b>n</b>ts.<br /><br />-When she <b>has</b> finished to revise, we <b>has</b> started to correct this scheme, <b>which</b> ha<b>d</b> five parts:<br /><br />-Paqui <b>has</b> explained us that this style had just the opposite characteristics of the Renaissance Art.<br /><br /><br />-<b>has</b> drawn the diferents compone<b>n</b>ts of the architecture. And then we <b>have</b> seen some examples of this, like the square and colonnade of saint Peter of the <b>V</b>atican by Gian Lorenzo Bernini, in Italy and the Versailles <b>P</b>alace by Le <b>V</b>au, Mansar<b>t</b> and le<b>No</b>tre, in France.<br /><br />-The pur<b>po</b>se in this style was representing movement, capturing f<b>l</b>eeting movements<br /><br />-And we <b>have</b> seen also examples, like Apol<b>l</b>o and Daphne by Gian Lorenzo Bernini, Paqui <b>has told</b> us the <b>story</b> of this sculpture when Daphne fle<b>d</b> from Apol<b>l</b>o and bec<b>a</b>me a tree<br /><br />-use <b>of</b> oil painting, predominance of colour over drawing<b>,</b> use <b>of</b> warm colours, contrast o<b>f</b> light and shadows, realism, movement, complex, compositions in order to s<b>h</b>ock the audience...And also we<b>have</b> seen some examples, like Death of the Virgin, by Caravaggio, <b>which</b> was<b> a stran</b>ge painting because the painter (have) used a young prostitute <b>to</b> represent the old Virgin, and The calling of Saint Matthew also by Caravaggio.<br /><br />-And we <b>have</b> copied some words <b>o</b>n the glossary:<br />to s<b>h</b>ock-impactar<br /><br />-<b>Solomonic</b> column- <b>columna salomónica</b><br /><br />-And <b>we</b> have an exam next <b>F</b>riday<br /><br />That's all I've found. Bye!<br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-71515986971458819512014-11-04T17:26:18.381+01:002014-11-04T17:26:18.381+01:00Oh, my God, in architecture you have written "...Oh, my God, in architecture you have written "diferents componets". I guess you meant DIFFERENT(*) COMPONENTS.<br /><br />*we write "different" in singular (we don't say "differents") because normally the adjectives don't have a plural form.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11922446385341768115noreply@blogger.com