tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post5748593315111722248..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 30 of September ( Thursday )Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-39380006876866813152014-12-14T11:40:18.176+01:002014-12-14T11:40:18.176+01:00You didn't change the date of your journal and...You didn't change the date of your journal and there are several mistakes you didn't correct: <br /><br />Goodbye<b>, classmates</b>. They are more than one. Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-30608420009041249802014-10-04T13:11:12.951+02:002014-10-04T13:11:12.951+02:00Hello,
THese are my corrections and comments.
Re...Hello, <br /><br />THese are my corrections and comments.<br />Remember to erase the words in brackets and correct what you have in bold font.<br /><br />- WORD ORDER: The correct way to place the complements in English is the following: Pay attention to the word order: first Direct Complement, after Indirect complement and later, complements of place, manner and time. So this is what you should have written in the first sentence: Today in Social <b>S</b>ciences we have started correcting the previous Journal <b>of my class</b>, <b>written by Camila</b>/ that <b>Camila wrote</b>, with (the) Paqui. You can't translate word by word from Spanish<br /><br />- several thing<b>s</b> for example, continue <b>to add words to</b> the glossary with new word<b>s</b><br /><br />- Lam<b>b</b><br /><br />- Barbac<b>o</b>a<br /> <br />- And (them start to) <b>after this, we have started a new point of the unit</b>. WE didn't start a new unit<br /><br />- a s<b>cheme</b> that explained the Renaissance art <b>in the Hispanic MOnarchy</b>. The s<b>cheme is</b> very easy to study <b>and it's</b> formed by 3 parts<br /><br />- with the 3 stage<b>s into which</b> the architecture <b>divided</b> and we've ha<b>d</b> to explain and <b>give/write</b> examples with the help of the <b>PowerPoint presentation</b>.<br /><br />And the end of the class when <b>we have finished the scheme</b> (the) <b>P</b>aqui <b>has given</b> one exercise that is about (the) Charles I.<br /><br />Add the captions of the pictures you've included. We have to know what they represent and their relationship with the contents of the lesson. <br /><br /><br />You could have been more specific about thw contents: the different art styles, some examples of what we studied... You have to improve and you can't make the same mistakes you made in 2º: <br /><br />- give homework, not send<br /><br />- scheme<br /><br />- word order<br /><br />You have to pay more attention and correct all these mistakes. Bye!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-50787370684141633992014-10-02T21:04:07.275+02:002014-10-02T21:04:07.275+02:00Hello José Luis,
Today is not the 30th September...Hello José Luis, <br /><br />Today is not the 30th September, but the 2nd of October. Remember to add the label of your group (4th ESO C-D) and another one with your name. <br /><br />I'll check your journal tomorrow. Bye!<br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com