tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post5283610501140117897..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: Saint Longinus by BerniniPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-24128182668766626262014-11-27T20:07:17.166+01:002014-11-27T20:07:17.166+01:00I have made your pictures bigger, so that we can a...I have made your pictures bigger, so that we can appreciate the details better. Bye.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-42667425614372021172014-11-27T20:01:59.073+01:002014-11-27T20:01:59.073+01:00Hello Marta,
This text is not ordered. I thing y...Hello Marta, <br /><br />This text is not ordered. I thing you copied the end at the beginning. Another confusing thing is that you included the sources in the middle of the text. It’s better that you copy all of them together after the text, except for the sources of the pictures, that have to be below every of them, and don’t write them in brackets. I don’t like that you used El rincón del vago as a source. This is not a good website. <br /><br /><br />Please, reorder the text in the right way when you correct it. These are the corrections I’ve made:<br /><br />- It is clearly a Baroque work art because it represents a fleeting moment (the <b>conversion</b> of Longinus <b>to Christianity</b>... The columns of this sculpture are <b>So</b>lomonic columns.<br /><br />- The author of this sculpt<b>ure</b> was Gian Lorenzo Bernini between 1628 and 1638 (Italy), an Italian sculptor, ar<b>ch</b>itect and painter. <br /><br />- It is ma<b>d</b>e up of marble, polychrome(d) wood and bronze. It’s 300 cm high. It is <b>nowadays</b> in the Basilic<b>a</b> of Saint Peter, in Rome.<br /><br /> -...the most important part of the life of the people in his works, for example, (is written in) the Bible <b>explains</b> that Longinus was one of the Roman centurions who t<b>ook</b> Jesus <b>Christ</b> to the cross. When Jesus <b>Christ</b> was on the cross, he look<b>ed</b> at him and said: “he was the real God’s son” so that is what the sculpture represents, his transformation to Christianis<b>y</b> (and that’s why Bernini made him looking at a celestia<b>l</b> light which passes through the <b>dome</b>). As we can see, Saint Longinus<b>’</b> face represents the victory.<br /><br /><br />-A piece of cranium of Saint Andr<b>ew</b> (his brother).<br /><br />-A piece of the Vera Cross (fo<b>und</b> by Saint Elena).<br /><br />-The veil of Saint Veronica.<br /><br />-A piece of the Lance of Passion of Christ.<br /><br /><br />- It had a great influence <b>on</b> his disciples...<br /><br />Your mark is 8. See you. <br /><br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com