tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post4577937149713556068..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 1st OF JUNEPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-41085277609906657412011-06-02T20:05:24.463+02:002011-06-02T20:05:24.463+02:00Hello Beatriz,
First of all, you have to write t...Hello Beatriz, <br /><br />First of all, you have to write the journal on time and there is no excuse. Writing the journal takes 10 minutes maximum and you have to be more responsible for your homework and school work (you have to prepare the exams with time). <br /><br />These are my corrections: <br /><br />- I don´t understand what you want to say when you write "we saw a type of powerpoint with pictures". What does "a type of Powerpoint" mean?<br /><br />- You have to change "painted" for "drew". I didn´t use colours and I drew some <b>architectural elements </b>. You have to change the preposition "in". We can´t do anything "in the blackboard", but <b>on</b> the blackboard. <br /><br />- <b>Frieze</b> instead of freize.<br /><br />- You have written "learnt" instead of "showed". <br /><br />- Remember that the names of the languages have to be written in capital letters: English, Italian. <br /><br />- This verb "argueded" doesn´t exist. I suppose you wanted to write "scolded".<br /><br />- This sentence is not good:"Some things of this unit we did the last year but never go bad to do a review". You can´t translate word by word from Spanish to English. You should better change the word order. Try to write this sentence in English: "El año pasado estudiamos algunos de estos conceptos artísticos, pero repasar siempre es una buena idea".<br /><br />- This sentence is very long and it needs some punctuation marks: "The majority of the architects are interesting for example the basilica of Saint Peter that it was built by three or four architects at the time the most famous was Michelangelo (under this text there is a photo of vatican basilic)". You can divide the sentence into three different sentences. And change "under" for "above", because you have put the picture <b>above</b> the text, not below. <br /><br />- Write the names of the works of art in capital letters: Saint Peter´s Basilica in the Vatican. <br /><br />And finally, I gave you something for homework (not homeworks): you have to read the appendix. "How to comment on a painting". <br /><br />Correct all this as soon as possible.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com