tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post4431885800381109490..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: Wednesday, 24th /November/2010Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-2638246478032815612010-11-26T16:36:31.224+01:002010-11-26T16:36:31.224+01:00REBECA, a good journal!!
And the journal it's ...REBECA, a good journal!!<br />And the journal it's very completed. I like this types of journals. See you on monday:)<br />BYE, BYE.Mªluz Ortiz S-Manjavacashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15595186162241676137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-6275893077325534062010-11-26T16:34:29.646+01:002010-11-26T16:34:29.646+01:00Hello Rebeca. Thanks for correcting the mistakes. ...Hello Rebeca. Thanks for correcting the mistakes. There are still some mistakes: <br /><br />- Someone is always singular and means "alguien". If you refer to different people, you can write "some students", "some classmates"...<br /><br />- In the same sentence you wrote "the different ways of go on strike". It´s better to write "the different ways of going on strike".<br /><br />Have a nice weekend.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-49755048383508741032010-11-26T15:16:45.957+01:002010-11-26T15:16:45.957+01:00Ok, I have checked it, thanks... :)Ok, I have checked it, thanks... :)Rebeca Garcíahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07499674586418751943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-66860926472855074722010-11-24T22:17:52.539+01:002010-11-24T22:17:52.539+01:00Hello Rebeca,
You did a good journal but I just w...Hello Rebeca,<br /><br />You did a good journal but I just want to make one comment about how you expressed one thing. Your word order and prepositions are a bit wrong. You wrote:<br /><br /><i><b>"one consisted in explain what was a union?and How they work? and the other one consisted in explain what was a strike?."</b></i><br /><br />it would be better to say:<br /><br /><i><b>"one consisted of explaining what unions are and how they work, and the other one consisted of explaining what a strike is."</b></i>Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11606936953467100217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-80228971101221264342010-11-24T20:41:08.242+01:002010-11-24T20:41:08.242+01:00Silvia, you could have written today´s journal.
...Silvia, you could have written today´s journal. <br /><br />What about the other students? You´re not cooperating in the checking of the journals.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-49372157860374716582010-11-24T18:04:15.432+01:002010-11-24T18:04:15.432+01:00It's a good journal. Very complete
Good workIt's a good journal. Very complete<br />Good workSilvianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-59304170458596079002010-11-24T17:26:27.279+01:002010-11-24T17:26:27.279+01:00Hello Rebeca.
There is a vocabulary mistake in t...Hello Rebeca. <br /><br />There is a vocabulary mistake in the last paragraph: the "sculptors" are the artists who make sculptures. The people who play in the Stock Exchange Market are "speculators". <br /><br />Read again what you have written. You may find some spelling or punctuation mistakes. If not, let´s wait for your classmates´ corrections. <br /><br />Bye!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com