tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post2458312379343486265..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 10th NovemberPaqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-7902394469185378812012-11-11T16:26:10.144+01:002012-11-11T16:26:10.144+01:00Hello everybody,
First of all, Werselio, you had...Hello everybody, <br /><br />First of all, Werselio, you had to write the journal ON FRIDAY, not on Saturday, as you did. We didn´t have lesson on Saturday. <br /><br />- You have to add a title to your post. <br /><br />- The corrections Roxana and Jesús have made are all OK, except for these ones:<br /><br />WORD ORDER: we have COPIED the contents of the FIRST Constitution on the notebook. As Roxana said, there are many words that have to be written in capital letters, and Constitution is one of them<br /><br /><br />I COULDN'T hear it because (without "the")most of the people were talking. You don´t have to add anything else to this sentence: erase "to other" and don´t add "each other", as Jesús told you. <br /><br />These are the mistakes your classmates haven´t found: <br /><br />- <b>At the beginning of the class</b> instead of "af first of the class"...<br />- WORD ORDER again in the first sentence: ...written some notes about....<b>on the blackboard</b> (this has to be at the end of the sentence). This sentence should be shorter. You could write: <b>We didn´t have time to copy them on Wednesday</b><br />- PONCTUATION MARKS: you can´t write such long sentences. You have to write commas or make shorter sentences. Example: ...reasons and factors of the war of independence in America<b>,</b> that lasted from the 1775 to 1783. The example of USA extended to many countries<b>,</b> especially in <b>South</b> America. <br /><br />- The war finish<b>ed</b> with...<br />- ... the <b>USA</b> Constitution<br />-...Every power controls the other <b>ones</b> to avoid abuse<br /><br />-... because <b>most</b> of the people...<br />- <b>To finish all that</b><br /><br />- <b>Bill of Rights</b> in capital letters. The explanation is not correct. The Bill of Rights was an addition to the Constitution that included the 10 ten amendments (corrections), referred to some rights every citizen had. Remember that these rights were only recognized for those who were considered to be citizens: white men who didn´t have to work for others, because they were property owners. Women, slaves, Native Americans were excluded from the rights reflected in the Constitution. <br /><br />- Today we have also copied...<b>,</b> but today <b>they</b> were less<b>than</b><br />- Supreme Court of Justice and Tribunal Supremo in capital letters<br />- Destituci<b>ón</b>. No spelling mistakes in Spanish either, please! <br />- Checks and balance<b>s</b><br /><br />I think you shouldn´t limit to copy the notes you´ve copied on your notebook when you write the journal, because the lessons are more than the notes and exercises and more things happen, such as questions students ask...<br /><br />That´s all. I hope you will be faster correcting the journal than writing it. See you tomorrow!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-48049823704979695762012-11-11T01:34:32.394+01:002012-11-11T01:34:32.394+01:00Hello!
You journal is good but these are the mista...Hello!<br />You journal is good but these are the mistakes I have found:<br />- Social Sciences in capital letters.<br />- Enlightenment in capital letters.<br />- Declaration of Independence in capital letters.<br />- that we don't have time to COPY ON Wednesday (as Jesús has said).<br />- War of Independence in capital letters.<br />- I think that you can improve the paragraph about the correction of the exercise 15, developing it.<br />- You can explain the division of powers and the institutions in which the State was divided.<br />- I think that both "Federal Republic" and "State" have to be written in capital letters.<br />- The meaning of amendment is enmienda.<br />- Also Paqui has given us an exercise ABOUT the causes and development of the WAR OF THE SPANISH SUCCESSION.Roxanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10790941109606880331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-83442068894518484392012-11-10T20:18:55.377+01:002012-11-10T20:18:55.377+01:00Hello Werse,
I think that it's good but I have...Hello Werse,<br />I think that it's good but I have found some mistakes:<br />-...that we DIDN'T have time ON Wednesday(in the first paragraph)<br />-...we have COPIED on the notebook the contents of the FIRST constitution<br />-...I COULDN'T hear it because (without "the")most of the people were talking EACH other<br />-....THESE WERE rights that..<br />-Today we HAVE ALSO HAD to copy...<br />-(in the glossary) the letter "à" between the words has to be substitute by -> or :<br />-...to correct (without "it") NEXT Monday.<br />I like the photo about the bill of rights<br /><br />See you!Jesus Moraleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11327766589494056633noreply@blogger.com