tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post2027934651620307732..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: The Descend from the Cross, Peter Rubens.Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-10784364243446066252014-11-29T16:42:03.156+01:002014-11-29T16:42:03.156+01:00Hello, Andrea,
Here you have my corrections. You...Hello, Andrea, <br /><br />Here you have my corrections. You haven't folowed the scheme. because your work is mainly a description, but you don't explain the Barque features of the painting. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. You should read your work before posting it. <br /><br />The title of your painting is <i>The Descen<b>t</b> from the Cross</i>. Correct this everytime it appears, please. And "Amberes" is Antwerp in English, so change it in all the places you’ve written it. <br /><br />You can't use the present as in Spanish. Present is for usual actions, not for punctual actions. You have to use the present continuous: I'm including, <br />attaching...<br /><br />- My work of pai<b>n</b>ting is about <br /><br />- It was commission<b>ed</b> by the <b>Arquebusiers Brotherhood on </b> the 7th of September of 1611. You should say where this brotherhood was from. <br /><br /><br />It was finished <b>i</b>n 1624. Nowadays it’s located in the Cathedral of <b>Antwerp</b> (Belgium)<br /><br /><br />- Peter <b>Paul Rubens</b> was a Flemish painter, <b>he</b> was the biggest figure of the Baroque in northern (of) Europe. People remember him like a big humanist, a clairvoy<b>a</b>nt idealist, a d<b>i</b>screet man and honest that ignore the arrogant a<b>t</b>titude of the powerful men. <br /><br />- The technique used is oil <b>on</b> canvas.<br /><br /><br />- The Descen<b>t</b> fro<b>m</b> the Cross is the <b>central pannel</b> of a tryp<b>tich</b> (..)<br /> <br />- The range of colour<b>s</b> used is vari<b>ed</b>, we can see red, violet, yelow...., represent<b>ing</b> Ruben<b>s</b> like a big colourist. The lights and s<b>h</b>adows are inspire<b>ed on</b> the school of Caravag<b>g</b>io.<br /><br />The painting is organized around <b>the</b> figure of Jesus Christ and the white fabric linen that slips on his body. Christ is already dead, the calm(less) and the serenity impregnate the picture. Around h<b>im</b> are all the persons who <b>are developing</b> the action of <b>descending</b> (the) Christ form the cross. It has (a) little <b>spatial</b> depth . The figures occupy the whole picture and it<b>’s made</b> in a classical relief. The Virgin participate<b>s in</b> the descen<b>t</b> with the other(s) figures. J<b>ohn with Nicodemus are holding</b> the body of Christ. On the lef<b>t, Joseph of Arimathea is holding </b> the fabric that that slips <b>from</b> the body of Jesus. Mar<b>y Magdalen is holding one of Jesus’ feet. At</b> the top of the cross two men are taking <b>Jesus down</b>. It express<b>es</b> liking education of Jesuit. <b>I don’t understand this last sentence</b><br /><br />- I<b>’m including</b> other(s) Rubens’ paintings like: <br /><br />-The adoration of the <b>Magi</b><br /><br />-The <b>Holy</b> family with Saint An<b>ne</b><br /><br />-The dinner in Em<b>maus</b>.<br /><br />- I<b>’m attaching</b> one photo of Rubens and Cathedral of A<b>ntwerp</b>.<br /><br />- Finally, I<b>’m including</b> the sources where I look<b>ed for</b> information<br /><br />The sources of your images are not correct. You have to rewrite them correctly. When you look for them on Google Images, you have to open every picture and copiy the link, not the Google Images link. Do it properly, please. I'm tired of saying the same things thousands of times. <br /><br />Your mark is 6.5. Bye.Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.com