tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post1298647716702793513..comments2023-07-09T16:20:55.860+02:00Comments on Today in Social Sciences...: 5/DECEMBER/2012Paqui Pérez Fonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-37185764666537208422012-12-09T20:12:52.962+01:002012-12-09T20:12:52.962+01:00Hello Alicia,
As your classmtes have told you, y...Hello Alicia, <br /><br />As your classmtes have told you, you have to include the sources of the pictures and their captions (explain what the pictures represent). <br /><br />These are my corrections: <br /><br />- The post I wrote was about <b>the main decisions made by the National Constituent Assembly</b><br /><br />- <b>The origin of the right and left concepts in politics comes</b> from the French REvolution. The peiple who wanted to <b>preserve</b> the <i>Ancien<br />Régime</i><b>sat on the right of the meeting room and the people who wanted to eliminate it sat on the left</b>. Remember that in English we say <b>on the left, on the right</b>.<br /><br />- The monarchy didn´t end when the king died. On the 10th August 1792 a crowd of sans culottes stormed the Tuileries Palace, because France was being attacked by Austria and Prussia and they realized that the king had been conspiring against the Assembly. After the storming of the Palace, the king was arrested and a new assembly, the National Convention, proclaimed the REpublic. <br /><br />- <b>summarizing</b><br />- Condorcet was a <b>revolutionary</b> or a member of the Assembly<br />- equal rights for <b>women</b><br />- <b>Vergniaud</b><br />- Guillotin didn´t invent the guillotine. Read the post I wrote about this device. Guillotin proposed a more humanitarian way of executing people, but he didn´t invent the guillotine. Other people did it, using his idea of a faster and less bloody death. <br /><br />That´s all. See you!Paqui Pérez Fonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09825244803602259869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-82907810637994879562012-12-06T12:59:46.586+01:002012-12-06T12:59:46.586+01:00Hi! I like your journal and I think is very comple...Hi! I like your journal and I think is very complete but I have found some mistakes:<br />Was Salle du Manege: Salle du Manege was.<br />Vocabulaire: Vocabulary<br />Good work but remember to put the links of the photos!<br />See you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15475481881735024616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-16006239396960796612012-12-05T17:56:18.897+01:002012-12-05T17:56:18.897+01:00Hello Alicia,
Your journal is good. I have found ...Hello Alicia,<br /><br />Your journal is good. I have found some mistakes:<br />-Social Science -> Social Sciences.<br />-I came -> I have come.<br />-fly (there weren't airplanes ;)) -> flee ("to flee" means "huir").<br />-writen -> written.<br />-balckboard -> blackboard.<br /><br />Bye!Salva Fuenteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07626465504093858958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7968761101230823169.post-80978679029856349192012-12-05T17:30:54.668+01:002012-12-05T17:30:54.668+01:00Hi Alicia !
Your jounal is very good, I like it ...Hi Alicia ! <br /><br />Your jounal is very good, I like it so much! But remember, you have to put the links of the photos, you had forgetten.<br /><br />I hadn't found any mistakes, you have writen all very good. <br /><br />Bye bye, and happy long weekend ! mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14867603254620777880noreply@blogger.com